From 62be77b3f4bbbfb62847309fdc0bc262b63ce24d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Squirlll <142749345+Squirlll@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2023 02:31:27 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] UI: grammar/typo fixes (#878) --- src/Augmentation/Augmentations.ts | 52 +++++++++---------- src/Augmentation/CircadianModulator.ts | 4 +- src/Augmentation/ui/AugmentationsRoot.tsx | 6 +-- .../doc/advanced/offlineandbonustime.md | 4 +- src/Faction/FactionHelpers.tsx | 4 +- 5 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/Augmentation/Augmentations.ts b/src/Augmentation/Augmentations.ts index fd571da70..34f3fa2b8 100644 --- a/src/Augmentation/Augmentations.ts +++ b/src/Augmentation/Augmentations.ts @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { info: "A chip containing the psyche of the greatest BitRunner to ever exists. " + "Installing this relic significantly increases ALL of your stats. " + - "However it may have unintended consequence on the users mental well-being.", + "However, it may have unintended consequence on the users mental well-being.", stats: "Grants access to unimaginable power.", hacking: 2, strength: 2, @@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 1.65e10, info: "Upgrades the BLADE-51b Tesla Armor with a concentrated deuterium-fluoride laser " + - "weapon. It's precision and accuracy makes it useful for quickly neutralizing " + + "weapon. Its precision and accuracy makes it useful for quickly neutralizing " + "threats while keeping casualties to a minimum.", prereqs: [AugmentationName.BladeArmor], bladeburner_success_chance: 1.08, @@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { "A DNA recombination of the EMS-4 Gene. This genetic engineering " + "technique was originally used on Bladeburners during the Synthoid uprising " + "to induce wakefulness and concentration, suppress fear, reduce empathy, " + - "improve reflexes, and improve memory among other things.", + "improve reflexes, and improve memory, among other things.", bladeburner_success_chance: 1.03, bladeburner_analysis: 1.05, bladeburner_stamina_gain: 1.02, @@ -802,7 +802,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 2.5e9, info: "An upgrade to the BrachiBlades augmentation. It infuses " + - "the retractable blades with an advanced graphene material " + + "the retractable blades with an advanced graphene material, " + "making them stronger and lighter.", prereqs: [AugmentationName.BrachiBlades], strength: 1.4, @@ -817,7 +817,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 1.1e7, info: "Uploads the architecture and design details of a Hacknet Node's CPU into " + - "the brain. This allows the user to engineer custom hardware and software " + + "the brain. This allows the user to engineer custom hardware and software " + "for the Hacknet Node that provides better performance.", hacknet_node_money: 1.15, hacknet_node_purchase_cost: 0.85, @@ -828,7 +828,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 5.5e6, info: "Uploads the architecture and design details of a Hacknet Node's main-memory cache " + - "into the brain. This allows the user to engineer custom cache hardware for the " + + "into the brain. This allows the user to engineer custom cache hardware for the " + "Hacknet Node that offers better performance.", hacknet_node_money: 1.1, hacknet_node_level_cost: 0.85, @@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { [AugmentationName.HuntOfArtemis]: { repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, - info: "magneto-turboencabulator based on technology by Micha Eike Siemon, increases the user's electro-magnetic sensitivity.", + info: "Magneto-turboencabulator based on technology by Micha Eike Siemon, increases the user's electro-magnetic sensitivity.", stats: "This augmentation makes the Minesweeper minigame easier by showing the location of all mines and keeping their position.", isSpecial: true, @@ -959,9 +959,9 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { repCost: 2.5e4, moneyCost: 5.5e9, info: - "The DNA is genetically modified to enhance the human's body " + - "extracellular matrix (ECM). This improves the ECM's ability to " + - "structurally support the body and grants heightened strength and " + + "A drug which incites a DNA modification to the body's extracellular " + + "matrix (ECM). This improves the ECM's ability to structurally " + + "support the body, granting heightened strength and " + "durability.", strength_exp: 1.05, defense_exp: 1.05, @@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { "Extra-ocular neurons taken from old martial art master. Injecting them gives the user the ability to " + "predict the enemy's attack before they even know it themselves.", stats: - "This augmentation makes the Slash minigame easier by showing you via an indicator when the slash in coming.", + "This augmentation makes the Slash minigame easier by showing you via an indicator when the slash is coming.", isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionName.ShadowsOfAnarchy], }, @@ -1096,9 +1096,9 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { repCost: 3.75e4, moneyCost: 3.75e8, info: - "A drug that genetically modifies the neurons in the brain " + - "resulting in neurons that never die, continuously " + - "regenerate, and strengthen themselves.", + "A drug that genetically modifies the neurons in the brain, " + + "resulting in neurons that continuously " + + "regenerate and strengthen themselves.", hacking_exp: 1.4, factions: [FactionName.Chongqing], }, @@ -1106,9 +1106,9 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { repCost: 500, moneyCost: 750e3, info: - "Undetectable adamantium nanobots injected in the users bloodstream. The NeuroFlux Governor " + + "Undetectable adamantium nanobots injected in the user's bloodstream. The NeuroFlux Governor " + "monitors and regulates all aspects of the human body, essentially 'governing' the body. " + - "By doing so, it improves the users performance for most actions.", + "By doing so, it improves the user's performance for most actions.", stats: `This special augmentation can be leveled up infinitely. Each level of this augmentation increases MOST multipliers by 1% (+${( donationBonus * 100 ).toFixed(6)}%), stacking multiplicatively.`, @@ -1253,7 +1253,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 2.5e6, info: "A thermo-powered artificial nutrition generator. Endogenously " + - "synthesizes glucose, amino acids, and vitamins and redistributes them " + + "synthesizes glucose, amino acids, and vitamins, and redistributes them " + "across the body. The device is powered by the body's naturally wasted " + "energy in the form of heat.", strength_exp: 1.2, @@ -1547,16 +1547,16 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { hacknet_node_core_cost: 1.1, hacknet_node_level_cost: 1.1, work_money: 0.9, - stats: "Its unstable nature decreases all your stats by 10%", + stats: "Its unstable nature decreases all your stats by 10%.", factions: [FactionName.ChurchOfTheMachineGod], }, [AugmentationName.StaneksGift2]: { repCost: 1e6, moneyCost: 0, info: - "The next evolution is near, a coming together of man and machine. A synthesis greater than the birth of the human " + + "The next evolution is near, a union of man and machine. A synthesis greater than the birth of the human " + "organism. Time spent with the gift has allowed for acclimatization of the invasive augment and the toll it takes upon " + - "your frame granting a 5% reduced penalty to all stats.", + "your frame, granting a 5% reduced penalty to all stats.", prereqs: [AugmentationName.StaneksGift1], isSpecial: true, hacking_chance: 0.95 / 0.9, @@ -1585,7 +1585,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { hacknet_node_core_cost: 1.05 / 1.1, hacknet_node_level_cost: 1.05 / 1.1, work_money: 0.95 / 0.9, - stats: "The penalty for the gift is reduced to 5%", + stats: "The penalty for the gift is reduced to 5%.", factions: [FactionName.ChurchOfTheMachineGod], }, [AugmentationName.StaneksGift3]: { @@ -1594,7 +1594,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { info: "The synthesis of human and machine is nothing to fear. It is our destiny. " + "You will become greater than the sum of our parts. As One. Embrace your gift " + - "fully and wholly free of it's accursed toll. Serenity brings tranquility in the form " + + "fully and wholly free of its accursed toll. Serenity brings tranquility in the form " + "of no longer suffering a stat penalty. ", prereqs: [AugmentationName.StaneksGift2, AugmentationName.StaneksGift1], isSpecial: true, @@ -1759,7 +1759,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 5.5e8, info: "A highly advanced bionic hand. This prosthetic not only " + - "enhances strength and dexterity but it is also embedded " + + "enhances strength and dexterity, but is also embedded " + "with hardware and firmware that lets the user connect to, access, and hack " + "devices and machines by just touching them.", strength: 1.15, @@ -1793,7 +1793,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { moneyCost: 2.75e9, info: "A synthetic symbiotic virus that is injected into human brain tissue. The Vangelis virus " + - "heightens the senses and focus of its host, and also enhances its intuition.", + "heightens the senses and focus of its host while also enhancing their intuition.", dexterity_exp: 1.1, bladeburner_analysis: 1.1, bladeburner_success_chance: 1.04, @@ -1824,7 +1824,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { `A copy of the WKS harmonizer from the MIA leader of the ${FactionName.ShadowsOfAnarchy} ` + "injects *Γ-based cells that provides general enhancement to the body.", stats: - "This augmentation makes many aspects of infiltration easier and more productive, via increased timer and rewards, reduced damage taken, etc.", + "This augmentation makes many aspects of infiltration easier and more productive via increased timer and rewards, reduced damage taken, etc.", isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionName.ShadowsOfAnarchy], }, @@ -1888,7 +1888,7 @@ export const Augmentations: Record = (() => { "Zoë's Omnicerebrum Ënhancer for sleeves inserts an omnicerebrum into your sleeve. " + "An omnicerebrum is a near perfect simulation of the human brain, allowing it to take advantage of a larger variety of augments. " + "But you should know about this BitRunner, since you have one of these yourself!", - stats: "Allows sleeves to benefit from Stanek's Gift but it is less powerful if several are installed.", + stats: "Allows sleeves to benefit from Stanek's Gift, but is less powerful if several are installed.", factions: [ /*Technically in FactionNames.ChurchOfTheMachineGod but not really for display reasons */ ], diff --git a/src/Augmentation/CircadianModulator.ts b/src/Augmentation/CircadianModulator.ts index dc2238861..32fac50fb 100644 --- a/src/Augmentation/CircadianModulator.ts +++ b/src/Augmentation/CircadianModulator.ts @@ -42,8 +42,8 @@ function getRandomBonus(): CircadianBonus { description: "Increases the player's hacking chance by 25%.\n" + "Increases the player's hacking speed by 10%.\n" + - "Increases the amount of money the player's gains from hacking by 25%.\n" + - "Improves grow() by 10%.", + "Increases the amount of money the player gains from hacking by 25%.\n" + + "Improves the effectiveness of grow() by 10%.", }, { bonuses: { diff --git a/src/Augmentation/ui/AugmentationsRoot.tsx b/src/Augmentation/ui/AugmentationsRoot.tsx index ae40b79e3..01b97c25f 100644 --- a/src/Augmentation/ui/AugmentationsRoot.tsx +++ b/src/Augmentation/ui/AugmentationsRoot.tsx @@ -36,9 +36,9 @@ const NeuroFluxDisplay = (): React.ReactElement => { <> Bitburner blood donation community program - The blood donation program is a continuous real life event started on 2022-04-01. To participate simply go - donate blood, plasma, or platelets to your local organization and take a picture as proof (hide your personal - information). Then send the proof to hydroflame on reddit or discord. + The blood donation program is a continuous real life event started on 2022-04-01. To participate, simply go + donate blood, plasma, or platelets to a local organization and take a picture as proof (hide your personal + information). Then, send the proof to hydroflame on reddit or discord. Currently accumulated {CONSTANTS.Donations} donations. , diff --git a/src/Documentation/doc/advanced/offlineandbonustime.md b/src/Documentation/doc/advanced/offlineandbonustime.md index 7a20d4653..19bd4b59b 100644 --- a/src/Documentation/doc/advanced/offlineandbonustime.md +++ b/src/Documentation/doc/advanced/offlineandbonustime.md @@ -22,6 +22,6 @@ Also, note that because of the way the JavaScript engine works, whenever you rel # Bonus Time -Because of the above details, some activities in Bitburner accumulate "Bonus Time" while the game is closed or in an inactive browser tab . For mechanics that have a Bonus Time effect, the rate of the associated activity or task is significantly increased. +Because of the above details, some activities in Bitburner accumulate "Bonus Time" while the game is closed or in an inactive browser tab. For mechanics that have a Bonus Time effect, the rate of the associated activity or task is significantly increased. -For example if a certain [Bladeburner](bladeburners.md) contract requires 15 seconds to complete under normal conditions, the same task will be finished instead in 3 seconds if the Bonus Time effect is 5x. The specific details and effects of Bonus Time vary by mechanic. +For example, if a certain [Bladeburner](bladeburners.md) contract requires 15 seconds to complete under normal conditions, the same task will be finished instead in 3 seconds if the Bonus Time effect is 5x. The specific details and effects of Bonus Time vary by mechanic. diff --git a/src/Faction/FactionHelpers.tsx b/src/Faction/FactionHelpers.tsx index 627cd0ef9..593d04999 100644 --- a/src/Faction/FactionHelpers.tsx +++ b/src/Faction/FactionHelpers.tsx @@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ export function purchaseAugmentation(aug: Augmentation, fac: Faction, sing = fal return "You purchased " + aug.name; } else if (!Settings.SuppressBuyAugmentationConfirmation) { dialogBoxCreate( - `You purchased ${aug.name}. Its enhancements will not take effect until they are installed.` + - "To install your augmentations, go to the 'Augmentations' tab on the left-hand navigation menu." + + `You purchased ${aug.name}. Its enhancements will not take effect until they are installed. ` + + "To install your augmentations, go to the 'Augmentations' tab on the left-hand navigation menu. " + "Purchasing additional augmentations will now be more expensive.", ); }