From 0bc486afcdf824b9897c623adfa8ac36369f4716 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SebassNoob <78428559+SebassNoob@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 22 May 2022 23:51:12 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] fix typos, grammar and sentence structure --- src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx | 32 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx b/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx index 6c3519df5..4519dd373 100644 --- a/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx +++ b/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ "injects *Γ-based cells that provides general enhancement to the body.", stats: ( <> - This augmentation makes many aspect of infiltration easier and more productive. Such as increased timer, + This augmentation makes many aspects of infiltration easier and more productive. Such as increased timer, rewards, reduced damage taken, etc. ), @@ -118,9 +118,9 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ moneyCost: 1e6, info: "Extra-occular neurons taken from old martial art master. Injecting the user the ability to " + - "predict enemy attack before they even know it themself.", + "predict enemy attack before they even know it themselves.", stats: ( - <>This augmentation makes the Slash minigame easier by showing you via an indictor when the slash in coming. + <>This augmentation makes the Slash minigame easier by showing you via an indicator when the slash in coming. ), isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionNames.ShadowsOfAnarchy], @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ name: AugmentationNames.WisdomOfAthena, repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, - info: "A connective brain implant to SASHA that focuses in pattern recognition and predictive templating.", + info: "A connective brain implant to SASHA that focuses in on pattern recognition and predictive templating.", stats: <>This augmentation makes the Bracket minigame easier by removing all '[' ']'., isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionNames.ShadowsOfAnarchy], @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ name: AugmentationNames.ChaosOfDionysus, repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, - info: "Opto-occipito implant to process visual signal before brain interpretation.", + info: "Opto-occipito implant to process visual signals before brain interpretation.", stats: <>This augmentation makes the Backwards minigame easier by flipping the words., isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionNames.ShadowsOfAnarchy], @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ name: AugmentationNames.HuntOfArtemis, repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, - info: "magneto-turboencabulator based on technology by Micha Eike Siemon, increases the users electro-magnetic sensitivity.", + info: "magneto-turboencabulator based on technology by Micha Eike Siemon, increases the user's electro-magnetic sensitivity.", stats: ( <> This augmentation makes the Minesweeper minigame easier by showing the location of all mines and keeping their @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ name: AugmentationNames.KnowledgeOfApollo, repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, - info: "Neodynic retention fjengeln spoofer using -φ karmions, net positive effect on implantees delta wave.", + info: "Neodynic retention fjengeln spoofer using -φ karmions, net positive effect on implantee's delta wave.", stats: <>This augmentation makes the Wire Cutting minigame easier by indicating the incorrect wires., isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionNames.ShadowsOfAnarchy], @@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ export const initGeneralAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ info: "TITN is a series of viruses that targets and alters the sequences of human DNA in genes that " + "control personality. The TITN-41 strain alters these genes so that the subject becomes more " + - "outgoing and socialable.", + "outgoing and sociable.", charisma_mult: 1.15, charisma_exp_mult: 1.15, factions: [FactionNames.Silhouette], @@ -526,9 +526,9 @@ export const initGeneralAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ moneyCost: 1.375e9, info: "A cranial implant that greatly assists in the user's ability to analyze social situations " + - "and interactions. The system uses a wide variety of factors such as facial expressions, body " + - "language, and the voice tone, and inflection to determine the best course of action during social" + - "situations. The implant also uses deep learning software to continuously learn new behavior" + + "and interactions. The system uses a wide variety of factors such as facial expression, body " + + "language, voice tone, and inflection to determine the best course of action during social " + + "situations. The implant also uses deep learning software to continuously learn new behavior " + "patterns and how to best respond.", charisma_mult: 1.6, charisma_exp_mult: 1.6, @@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ export const initGeneralAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ info: "This is an additional installation that upgrades the functionality of the " + "PC Direct-Neural Interface augmentation. When connected to a computer, " + - "The Neural Network upgrade allows the user to use their own brain's " + + "the Neural Network upgrade allows the user to use their own brain's " + "processing power to aid the computer in computational tasks.", prereqs: [AugmentationNames.PCDNI], company_rep_mult: 2, @@ -1172,7 +1172,7 @@ export const initGeneralAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ info: "A skin implant that reinforces the skin with highly-advanced synthetic cells. These " + "cells, when powered, have a negative refractive index. As a result, they bend light " + - "around the skin, making the user much harder to see to the naked eye.", + "around the skin, making the user much harder to see with the naked eye.", agility_mult: 1.05, crime_money_mult: 1.1, factions: [FactionNames.SlumSnakes, FactionNames.Tetrads], @@ -1734,7 +1734,7 @@ export const initBladeburnerAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ info: "An improved version of Vangelis, a synthetic symbiotic virus that is " + "injected into human brain tissue. On top of the benefits of the original " + - "virus, this also grants an accelerated healing factor and enhanced " + + "virus, this also grants accelerated healing and enhanced " + "reflexes.", prereqs: [AugmentationNames.VangelisVirus], defense_exp_mult: 1.1, @@ -1930,7 +1930,7 @@ export const initChurchOfTheMachineGodAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ info: "The next evolution is near, a coming together of man and machine. A synthesis greater than the birth of the human " + "organism. Time spent with the gift has allowed for acclimatization of the invasive augment and the toll it takes upon " + - "your frame granting lesser penalty of 5% to all stats.", + "your frame granting a 5% reduced penalty to all stats.", prereqs: [AugmentationNames.StaneksGift1], isSpecial: true, hacking_chance_mult: 0.95 / 0.9, @@ -1969,7 +1969,7 @@ export const initChurchOfTheMachineGodAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ info: "The synthesis of human and machine is nothing to fear. It is our destiny. " + "You will become greater than the sum of our parts. As One. Embrace your gift " + - "fully and wholly free of it's accursed toll. Serenity brings tranquility the form " + + "fully and wholly free of it's accursed toll. Serenity brings tranquility in the form " + "of no longer suffering a stat penalty. ", prereqs: [AugmentationNames.StaneksGift2, AugmentationNames.StaneksGift1], isSpecial: true, From cd8f0cdbdabb29a3944f3fa930c5c6957136ca32 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SebassNoob <78428559+SebassNoob@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 23 May 2022 00:03:51 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] more ss fixes --- src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx b/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx index 4519dd373..7277c9eef 100644 --- a/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx +++ b/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx @@ -117,8 +117,8 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, info: - "Extra-occular neurons taken from old martial art master. Injecting the user the ability to " + - "predict enemy attack before they even know it themselves.", + "Extra-occular neurons taken from old martial art master. Injecting them gives the user the ability to " + + "predict the enemy's attack before they even know it themself.", stats: ( <>This augmentation makes the Slash minigame easier by showing you via an indicator when the slash in coming. ), From 774eced317dc25d53a6ded3efb2d9fa4da2eddc6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SebassNoob <78428559+SebassNoob@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 23 May 2022 00:05:40 +0800 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] grammar --- src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx b/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx index 7277c9eef..e3faedc5b 100644 --- a/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx +++ b/src/Augmentation/data/AugmentationCreator.tsx @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ export const initSoAAugmentations = (): Augmentation[] => [ name: AugmentationNames.WisdomOfAthena, repCost: 1e4, moneyCost: 1e6, - info: "A connective brain implant to SASHA that focuses in on pattern recognition and predictive templating.", + info: "A connective brain implant to SASHA that focuses on pattern recognition and predictive templating.", stats: <>This augmentation makes the Bracket minigame easier by removing all '[' ']'., isSpecial: true, factions: [FactionNames.ShadowsOfAnarchy],